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TheWatchman Chapter02 Page06

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Chapter 1 The Watchman Series
Chapter 2 The Watchman Chapter 02 Page 01
Chapter 3 TheWatchman Chapter03 Pomp&Circumstance April2015
Chapter 4 TheWatchman Chapter04 Page01
Chapter 5 TheWatchman Chapter05 Page01

Oh my, this was one hard page. I feel like resting for a month (nope, can't do that). Don't ever believe anyone when they say making comics is easy. Oops, brain fart coming!


Here's Teeabu & kid face off in cell! Is everything good (like art, panel placement, dialog) on the page? Is the pacing good? Let me know what you think.

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I hope you don't mind me critiquing your older pages ^^;
This is just a common thing I see a lot of people do in left to right comics.  I'm just assuming that the "Who's there!" bubble is supposed to be read first?  If so, I would swap that panel with the one of the kid saying "hi"
It would work better with the pacing of the page if Teeabu's shouting "Who's there" was emphasized more in a larger panel giving you more room to make his gesture look more dynamic.  Then use the smaller panel for the lighter gesture of the little kid peaking out and saying "hi".