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*EDIT* I changed the panels via suggestion to fix the sound confusion & action/reaction balance. I also appreciate advice about the sound confusion too. It took a some more time to draw, correct & change the panels. I have the old page in my stash if you want to compare:

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Long ago someone told me perspective was easy & drawing people was hard. Ohhh, if I only perfected doing rooms. That one tiny bedroom took nearly a WEEK... What to do??? I gotta get better at this. Anyway, I experimented with screens, textures & Type fonts.

I won't give away with what's going on cuz I want to know if this gets the point across. Is this confusing or do the panels/dialog/sound effects clearly gives what is going on in the scenes. It would help me sooo much to let me know what you think. I'm new at this.  Luv you all.